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摘要:大家对于刚刚考试落幕的作文题目还意犹未尽, 今天优择教育的Nancy老师给大家分享一下2018年9月13日的雅思大作文: 作文题目: S ome people think scientific research is a waste of time and money,to

大家对于刚刚考试落幕的作文题目还意犹未尽,今天优择教育的Nancy老师给大家分享一下2018年9月13日的雅思大作文:


作文题目:

Some people think scientific research is a waste of time and money,to what degree do you agree or disagree?

Write at least 250 words.

 

 

 

题目分析

该题主要要求考生讨论在多大程度上赞同或者不赞同题目中的观点:进行科学研究是对时间和金钱的浪费。这个题目的难点可能在于对观点的思考和展开,范文从理论的应用和理论研究两方面着手,分别做出了思考和论证。

 

 

范文示例

In recent years, there has been a shift of interestwith in the scientific community away from theoretical research towards the application of existing theory, with the goal of securing technological development.

To that end, theoretical research scientists are now in short supply as the demand for immediate technological innovation increase, with the desire for financial gain at the heart of this.

There is a widely accepted perception that technological innovation is essential for the development of society. The last decade has seen something of an explosion in technological advancement, from social media to electronic currencies and new ways of making financial transactions. For example, when looking at digital money, I see a revolutionary technology that allows people or institutions to transfer funds instantly, securely and without a middleman. Digital

money can potentially expand international commerce and transform how we shop, save and do business in ways we probably cannot even yet fully understand. Drawing upon our existing understanding of science and apply this to the innovation of new technologies, we have successfully made leaps and bounds in this regard. The new technologies that now exist have made certain spheres of life more convenient and have also fueled economic growth in some sectors.

Nonetheless, the need for theoretical scientists will never go away, regardless of the interests of business and finance. Without a new generation of Einstein, Newtons, and Hawking, the intellectual landscape will be a lesser place and human progress will surely be slowed. We cannot simply regard the development of technology as the base upon which a better world is created. Scientists are essential to furthering our understanding of the world and make contributions to society that cannot be measured by economic gain alone. Inquiry breeds curiosity, which in turn creates minds better able to understand the world and solve problems.

To conclude, it is necessary to invest in technological innovation to improve quality of life and strive for economic growth.

Nevertheless, money must be set aside for scientific research as an end in itself, regardless of economic reasons.

 

 

 词汇积累:

 

the scientific community

科学界

theoretical research

理论研究

the application of existing theory

现有理论应用

secure technological development

确保技术发展

theoretical research scientist

理论研究科学家

in short supply

处于稀缺状态

immediate technological innovation

即时技术创新

the desire for financial gain

对经济利益的渴望

There is a widely accepted perception that

人们普遍认为

an explosion in technological advancement

科技进步的爆炸性增长

electronic currency

电子货币

make financial transactions

金融交易

digital money

数字货币

transfer funds instantly and securely

即时、安全地转移资金

expand international commerce

拓展国际商务

make leaps and bounds

取得飞跃

certain spheres of life

某些生活领域

fuel economic growth

促进经济增长

the intellectual landscape

知识分子的世界

further our understanding of the world

增进我们对世界的了解

in turn

反过来

improve quality of life

提高生活质量

strive for economic growth

争取经济增长

 

IELTS Writing对于语法和句子的要求是很高的,很多失分点在于未对细节进行把握,今天小优就来来谈谈这些细节:

IELTS Writing细节:写作格式

英文写作格式主要分齐头式和缩进式。

齐头式:顶头书写+段与段之间空出一行,会给人以整洁的感觉,小优也比较推荐大家使用这种格式。

缩进式:每一段的开头句缩进,但是段落之间没有空行,所以不是很受欢迎。

经常在作文中看到混搭式“齐头式+缩进式”,即段首句缩进+段落之间空行,给人以不伦不类的感觉,同学们一定要注意。

IELTS Writing细节分段

我们设想一下,如果我们拿着一篇文章,占了好几页,而它只有一段时,我们会怎么想:晕,不知道作者到底有几个意思。当我们的词汇和句式又不够丰富时,又没有驾驭好修辞手法时,怎么能让考官有耐心看完我们的文章呢?有人说了:好了,我知道了,多分几段。那么如果我们分了很多段落,中间的衔接不自然,论证能力又不足,费了半天劲也写不出几个句子,写出来又像流水账一样?所以,对于考试作文,要想两者均兼顾到,既用形式掩饰内容的不足,又能给考官以好印象,那么请把task1段落划分控制在3-5段,task2控制在4-6段,既能体现段落分配清晰,突出自己要表达的内容,又能避免论证太过分散而中心不明确。

IELTS Writing细节总结段

我们考试的时间比较紧张,很多考生在这样的情况下无法写出总结段,于是给考官一种文章缺乏完整性的感觉。建议考生尽量要写最后的summary,无论是task1还是task2。因为同学们可以利用最后一段来点题、归纳,这样可以最大限度地避免因为语言功底不深而导致的文章结构不明晰,说服力不强等问题,即用形式来弥补内容上无法克服的困难。再者,因为开头结尾段是我们平时练习得比较熟练的部分,所以我们很容易就搞定的,为什么放着拿分的部分不写呢?

 

IELTS Writing细节:标点“独行侠”问题

我们不太重视符号的问题,有些考生甚至一“逗”到底,还有到写成了“满天星”,每个单词的后面都有个小点点。按英文书写规定,标点应紧挨着它的附着意群进行标注,与另一个意群要以一个字符的空格隔开。但是在实际作文中经常发现学生不论什么标点都会当作一个单词来对待,即标点前后都空下空格,结果给人以标点满天飞的感觉,影响了文章的美感。大家平时练习时就要注意正确书写标点。

IELTS Writing细节:书写过于随意

每个人都有自己的书写习惯,但是雅思考试毕竟是要给外国人看的,所以大家如果能够在书写习惯上贴近老外,肯定会给人以亲切的卷面印象。比如不要书写得过于密集,以免让人看不清单词,影响理解。也不要写得过于稀疏而让人无法在eye span 范围内看到完整的意群,从而影响考官阅读。字不要写得太大,也不要太小。尽量不要连写以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清,造成考官阅卷障碍。

 
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